On last Friday, our presentation in English 12 class. my term have Sky Orange and I. We don't have too much time to do. at the moring , third class is no class for us. so we used this class finshed it. I think our presentation is not good. because we did not act before class. so we finshed soon in the class. not enough 5 mins. We bagan art by ourself. I think that must badly.!
but I hope our presentation can get a good mark! !
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Although ur writing is better than Mike, it still need to practice more. Don't u find ur meaning can be written many pages in Chinese? But in English u cannot...This is why u should do more practices!
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Last Friday, we did the presentation in English 12 class. My team members are Sky and Orange. We did not have too much time to work on it at the morning. Luckily,there was no class for us so we finished it. We did not practice the presentation any times, then we used the 5-minute-limited time in the class to practice it well. However, there is still some parts were not good enough...
I hope that our presentation can get a good mark!!!Cuz we try to do hard.
Johnson is going around correcting everyone. =) He can be my sidekick!
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